modify my 6pg story to make it better

As my professor told me my story was written in a hurry and like you didn’t spend time on it. I would like to modify it and make it better. Please modify the story, to make it better written and more interesting. There is no specific requirement for how you may changed, but still keep in mind make it no short than six page.

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