Thank you for your Unit 3 IP submission.
Rough Draft – The rough draft of your research paper on Substance Abuse and Crime progressing well. You have been able to incorporate the feedback from myself as well as some fellow classmates. The paper also contains good reliable sources to support your working theory an hypothesis. You also made good use of in-text citations and cited them properly. Just go a little more in depth in some of the areas and make sure that all grammar and sentence structures are correct. Try using a little more of your own words as well.
The paper is organized and developing well.