I already finished the paper about film and ideology but it doesn’t have a thesis so need to add one into.
After having a thesis, revising the paper around this thesis statement. And re-write some sentences to make them more natural.
I set the time limit to 3 days but I hope you could give me a revised draft at least half of the time left so I can still have time to suggest more changes if needed.
The paper is 10 pages long now. I think most of what you need is already included but you can add sources if needed.