help with second rough draft

Read over my first rough draft, make sure my thesis holds up to the rest of the essay, and check grammar, punctuation, spelling in-text resources and bibliography ”APA format. Change key points if needed and all other corrections. I will provide first rough draft. Also ,Reply back on journal on how you think you could improve research paper. Total word count is minimum of 1,000 words.

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